Friday, June 12, 2026
A POEM, MUSE AMONG THE STARS, AND AN AI REVIEW
MUSE AMONG THE STARSDonovan Baldwin
feeds on images of eyes...
muse among the stars
By Donovan Baldwin
- The Creative Drought: The opening line, "mind barren of words," establishes a state of intellectual or artistic emptiness. It perfectly captures writer's block, where the mind feels sterile, dry, and completely devoid of linguistic expression.
- The Transition to Vision: In the second line, the mind "feeds on images of eyes..." This marks a pivot from abstract thought to visual hunger. "Eyes" symbolize perception, connection, deep observation, or perhaps the gaze of others. Unable to produce words, the creator consumes raw visual and emotional data instead.
- Cosmic Rebirth: The final line, "muse among the stars," resolves the tension beautifully. By looking upward and outward to the cosmos, the poet finds their inspiration ("muse") liberated from earthly limitations. The vastness of the stars replaces the barrenness of the mind.
...) at the end of the second line as a brilliant structural tool. It creates a literal and figurative pause, mimicking the slow, drifting gaze of the poet moving from internal emptiness out into the night sky.Labels: donovan baldwin, images, muse, poem, poetry, poetry review, stars
Thursday, January 15, 2026
POEM - BULLFIGHT IN CIUDAD ACUÑA MEXICO 1967
The bulls in the pen were big black beasts
White foam lathered round their lips,
Their eyes holding a dark, deep knowledge,
Of what would soon occur...but, didn't care.
The horses were afraid before they ever entered.
Perhaps thwy smelled the old blood, fear, and death.
They were ancient, slatternly things and, in some way knew,
That horses didn't live long in this, their new profession.
The men talked and joked as though they didn't care,
But, their squinty eyes flicked from this to that.
Sometimes, one would walk off to be alone,
With whatever god he felt might owe him a favor.
The Sun burned both "sun" and "shade" sides of the arena,
Though tickets for "shade" cost more,
It didn't really matter to bulls, and horses, and men...
The bulls died, horses cried, and the men won.
Four bulls died that afternoon, but, one, at least, managed
To rip a matador's leg open, and toss him over the wall.
Afterwards, the men and I sat in real shade, drinking cold cerveza,
The horses got water and oats, but, the bulls had nothing.
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If you enjoyed this poem by Donovan Baldwin, you maight also enjoy his essay, Ignorance And Epiphany.
Labels: bullfight, donovan baldwin, Mexico, poem, poetry
Friday, September 26, 2025
POEM: WRITE TO ME OF LOVE
Write to me of love
Both sacred and profane.
Draw for me secrets
Within your pounding heart.
Song of the ends of
Exhilaration and ecstasy
Of your mind and body.
Step boldly, shyly forward
Eternally exposed by
Trailing transparent words.
How to describe you
Two simple words say so much...
Passionate woman
Write me honest words
Toss veils and cloaks far aside...
Show me who you are
Exposing at last
Your naked soul
Spilling out her words
Poetry in blood red ink...
Ichor of my muse
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More poetry by Donovan Baldwin
Like this poem? You might also like Safe Within Eden by Donovan Baldwin.
Labels: donovan baldwin, love poem, poem, poetry
Thursday, September 04, 2025
POEM - AGENT PROVOCATEUR
Labels: agent provocateur, fantasy, love poem, poem, poem of betrayal, poetry
Wednesday, September 03, 2025
NSFW POEM - SONG FOR SAPPHO
Labels: poem, poetry, Sappho. lesbian love
Tuesday, September 02, 2025
REVIEW OF THE POEM, "NAKED OUTSIDE OF EDEN" BY DONOVAN BALDWIN
"Naked Outside Of Eden, by Donovan Baldwin, is a short, evocative piece that focuses on a timeless, almost mythical female figure.
Analysis
The poem creates a powerful image of a woman who is both real and a figment of the speaker's imagination. She exists as a "secret thing, / Of fantasy and dream," suggesting she is an idealized, almost unattainable figure. This is reinforced by her presence in the "back corners of my mind."
The language used is rich with sensory detail. Words like "swirling dancing woman," "heat," "music," "fire," and "wine" paint a vivid picture of a wild, passionate, and celebratory scene. The speaker is captivated by her, describing her as a "Timeless dancer" with a face "Smiling across the flames." This imagery evokes a primal, ancient setting, perhaps a bonfire or a ritualistic dance.
The final lines, "As she dances ancient rituals / The artlessly seductive way / Women have known since / First a man and woman / Desired each other / Naked outside of Eden," connect this personal vision to a universal, primal human experience. The phrase "Naked outside of Eden" is particularly poignant and serves as the title. It suggests a love or desire that is pure, uninhibited, and exists in a world beyond the constraints and innocence of Eden—a more complicated, real, and passionate world. It implies a return to a more natural, honest state of being, free from shame or artifice.
Overall Impression
The poem is effective in its brevity and its ability to create a strong sense of mood and mystery. The speaker's deep fascination is palpable, and the final stanza elevates the personal admiration to a mythic level, linking it to the very origins of desire. The rhythm is free-flowing, mirroring the "swirling" and "dancing" of the subject. It is a well-crafted piece that leaves the reader with a lasting impression of raw, elemental desire.
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Labels: donovan baldwin, poem, poetry, review
Thursday, June 05, 2025
POEM - WALKING BY THE LAKE - BENBROOK LAKE, TEXAS
| Sunrise over Benbrook Lake, Texas |
Not the trees and the lake.
I just passed them today,
And I have seen others like them.
Today was different,
Walking by the lake.
As I looked at the morning mist,
Hanging over the lake,
Hiding the trees on the other side,
I wished that she was there.
Not too long ago that
Would not have happened.
Now, everything I see or do,
I want to share with her.
The big squirrel,
The leaf covered trail,
The sunlight on the water,
The fog that replaced it.
All is not complete until
She can see it,
Hear it,
Taste it,
Feel it,
Sense it,
With me.
That went through my mind,
Because,
Today was different,
Walking by the lake.
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Labels: benbrook lake, donovan baldwin, love poem, poem, poetry, texas, walking
Thursday, May 22, 2025
POEM - RAIN BEATS RHYTHMS ON YOUR SKIN
A symphony of secret sin.
I trace them as they strike and flow
Lips and tongue behind them go.
Breathless, I chase the silver sting,
A thirst for wildness, on the wing.
Your skin, a canvas, etched with rain,
My lips, medicine for your pain.
Eager, I pursue each drop
Hoping storms will never stop.
Your body only clothed by rain
So tempting to my fevered brain.
You my feast neath weeping sky,
Dance seductively as I
Touch and taste and drink my fill
Fingers drifting where they will.
So let the rain caress your skin,
Awash with past and future sin,
A promise in those beating drops,
Arousing love that never stops.
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Labels: donovan baldwin, love poem, poem, poem about rain, poetry
Friday, May 16, 2025
POEM - SAFE WITHIN EDEN
Labels: beauty, donovan baldwin, eden, love, peace, poem, poet, poetry
Friday, April 11, 2025
POEM - A PLACE I HAVEN'T BEEN YET
Labels: donovan baldwin, poem, poetry, wanderlust
Wednesday, April 02, 2025
POEM - A TIME TO DIE
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| Don Quixote On His Deeathbed |
"The notary was present, and he said that he'd never read in any book of chivalry that a knight errant had died in his bed so calmly, and in such a Christian way as don Quixote, who, amidst pity and tears of those surrounding him, gave up the ghost; that is, he died."
A Time To Die
Call when morning's blossom
Lingers still before my eyes,
Or when I've touched my neighbor;
At that time let me die.
Show me roses in a garden, or
Fields stretched beneath the snow,
Catch me dreaming, maybe singing,
I'll be prepared to go.
Don't come when hate surrounds me, or
Simply take me as I sleep.
At the moment of my leaving,
Give me one fine thing to keep.
Copyright: Donovan Baldwin
Labels: death, Don Quixote, donovan baldwin, Miguel de Cervantes, poem, poem about death, poetry
Sunday, March 30, 2025
POEM - FREEDOM AT FORTY-EIGHT, THOUGHTS OF A NEWLY DIVORCED MAN
Labels: divorce poem, donovan baldwin, flirtation, poem, poetry
Sunday, March 02, 2025
POEM - I WILL NOT WRITE THE WORDS
Labels: donovan baldwin, poem, poetry, power, words
Thursday, February 27, 2025
POEM - IF NOT WITHIN MY HEART
Labels: donovan baldwin, heart poem, love poem, poem, poetry
Sunday, February 16, 2025
POEM - THE EYES OF THE MAN
Labels: donovan baldwin, dragons, dreams, poem, poetry, spaceships
Thursday, February 06, 2025
HAVE I ONCE KNOWN YOU - A POEM OF A PAST ROMANCE FROM ANOTHER TIME AND PLACE PERHAPS
| The Crown of Love, 1875 by John Everett Millais (English, 1829–1896) |
Some other place or time?
Were we lovers then,
Winging forward to the now,
Where we find ourselves
United as before?
These eyes, these lips,
Seeming delightfully new,
Are yet, somehow,
So famliar, and,
Joyful to behold,
To touch once more...
Or so it seems, that
You and I once were one,
Lost to one another...
Seeking through eternity,
For that one who
Filled and made us whole.
I gaze upon you,
Reach for you,
In your newness to
This time and place,
And, with wonderment,
Confused by familiarity
And ease, must ask,
In this now and here...
Have I known you in
Some other place or time?
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Labels: donovan baldwin, love poem, lovers, poem, poetry, romantic poetry
Tuesday, February 04, 2025
POEM - FAVORITES
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Sunday, February 02, 2025
POEM - OLD HEIDELBERG CASTLE
| Heidelberg Castle |
Labels: castle, donovan baldwin, Heidelberg, poem, poetry
Thursday, January 30, 2025
POEM - A DRESS ONLY I CAN SEE
a beautiful dress for you
only i can see
you my model stand
erect and proudly naked...
i measure and cut
setting loving words
against your most precious skin
smoothing them in place
Art: Madame X by John Singer Sargent
Labels: donovan baldwin, dress, poem, poetry
POEM - WE ONLY WORK WITH WORDS
We poets do,
To sing,
To draw,
To paint,
To point,
To link,
To loosen that which must be free.
We only work with words,
We poets do,
As best we can,
As they come
As they go,
Or stay,
Emblazoned on our souls.
We only work with words,
We poets do,
So variable,
So insensible,
So certain,
So unsure,
So real,
So lying and yet, because...
We only work with words,
We poets do,
We love,
We laugh,
We cry,
We sing,
We praise,
We demand,
We defend,
And sometimes...
We fail.
For...
We only work with words,
We poets do,
And words are clay, which,
Though molded properly,
And sure and glistening at first,
May slump or turn drab,
In the heat of day and sight of men.
We only work with words,
We poets do,
And ask the reader to read,
What was in minds and hearts,
When set upon the page,
With eyes like ours,
Who saw the sun and sky,
And tried to sing its praises,
But missed the mark.
So too, with love, honor, and courage...
Read our tales with piety and pity,
For round-shouldered scribes,
Trying to make beauty out of letters,
For...
We only work with words,
We poets do,
And must leave the living,
And understanding of our work
Up to you...the reader.
Donovan Baldwin
30 Jan 2018
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